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Graeme Coles-Andrew's avatar

I'm a list-maker through and through, but with writing (emails 99% of the time) for anything over a single sentence I will usually write, rewrite and re-order paragraphs a few times, beyond the length of time that the response really needs - often it could have been resolved with a phone call, but I like the 'audit trail' aspect of email comms.

One pattern I have is that I'll commonly move the final paragraph to be the first. I am also pretty ruthless at slashing word count (especially with other people's verbose powerpoints), my rule being halve the words, then halve them again. I also use AI to refactor longer emails.

I often think of the cautionary "Fresh Fish Caught Today" anecdote. A fishmonger puts up a sign that reads “Fresh Fish Caught Today” and someone suggests trimming it:

“Fresh Fish Today” – the word “caught” is unnecessary.

“Fresh Fish” – no one sells day-old fish

“Fish” – why would it not be “fresh”?

Eventually, no sign at all – “they can smell it!”

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Helen Gifford's avatar

My version of journalling is using a mind map, so somewhere between a journal and a list? I find it helps me tidy my mind, realise my priorities and breathe a little easier! Usually that becomes a list for the day to day.

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